Showing posts with label Writing 2016. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing 2016. Show all posts
Monday, 5 December 2016
Ambassdor Application
Chastyti Ambassdor application from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.
Task description: To do this task we had to record a application to apply for ambassdor.
Thursday, 1 December 2016
One Tree hill
Walt: Write about One Tree Hill
Task descrption: To do this task I had to write about One tree hill. I had to write Hight in metres, and where it lives. After writing about One tree hill L went on google and searched up One tree hill. Then I screenshot the map, and put it into the prensentation.
Task descrption: To do this task I had to write about One tree hill. I had to write Hight in metres, and where it lives. After writing about One tree hill L went on google and searched up One tree hill. Then I screenshot the map, and put it into the prensentation.
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Wednesday, 19 October 2016
Poems
Walt: Writing Poems using, Verbs, Nouns and Adjectives.
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Thursday, 30 June 2016
Superhero Writing
| Walt: write a setting description. |
Once upon a time there lived a hero could Purple Lighter. She has a purple T-Shirt and a purple skirt, also a powers. In the dark city where Purple Lighter lived I nearly rained every night. Luckily it didn’t rain that night.
The next night a storm came. This storm wasn’t any storm, it was a magic storm. As soon as Purple Lighter saw the storm she quickly raced to the city to see what was going on. Once she arrived there she saw a black shadow sneak behind a tall building. When she she went to look she saw an Evil Fairy godmother. “ Did you make this storm” said Purple Lighter, Evil Fairy godmother replied “ Way Yes, And no one can stop to”. “ Are you sure” says Purple lighter. Throwing her stopping storm power in the sky the storm finally stop. “ Ha Ha” said Purple Lighter. “ What” replied Evil Fairy godmother, “ So I think it’s a goodbye for you” said Purple Lighter. So Purple Lighter had chased her.
To do this task I had to write and plan my writing about my superhero.
Wednesday, 15 June 2016
Monsters Character Descrpitons
Task description: To do this task I had to write about 4 different monsters in the presentation. The first monster I had to was pink. The other monsters were different colours, shapes and creatures.
Friday, 10 June 2016
Avengers Assemble
Walt: write a narrative that is descriptive (paints a picture in the reader's mind)
Image 2 attribution: http://media.comicbook.com/uploads1/2015/04/1---avengers-age-of-ultron-133307.jpg
Loud voices coming from the Avengers tower, Hawkeye and Hulk argued over who's stronger. The with a sense of sound the ultron’s could hear Hawkeye's voice. With a stumble ultrons start arriving. They surround the Avengers tower. Hulk looks out the window and cried out loud “ The ultrons are here, and surrounded the tower”.
With a flash the Avengers and Hawkeye run like flash to the bottom of the tower, and out the door. Grumblemling a ultron said “ I’m not looking for you I’m look for Hawkeye”, “ We could here his voice from all the way where we were” grumbled another ultron. Making his way in front of the Avengers came Hawkeye. He said “ What do you want”.
Thwack! went a hand of a ultron into Hawkeye’s face. The hero’s charged at the ultron’s. Bang, Boom Ka Pow, went a Lazzers from Iron man's chest. Whack! Hulk busted 10 ultron’s in a row. Thor’s hammer made lighting and killed almost all the ultron’s. Till they only faced the largest ultron. “ How we going to destroy this ultron, he’s too big” complained Iron man + Captain America. Somp, Somp, Somp, comes Hulk up behind the ultron and SPLAT, the ultron’s hand exploded. “ Thanks Hulk” said Iron man.
Task description: To do this task I had write aa story about this picture. First I had to plan out what my Orientation ( Begening ) Problem ( Middle ) Resolution ( End ). Then I had write what character are going to be, and what villans are there going to be. After that I Started writing my story.
Wednesday, 1 June 2016
Superhero story
Walt: write a narrative story.
Stomp, Stomp, Stomp, Came a Giant robot starting to arrive, and destroy the city. Coming out of nowhere Batman comes swinging from a tall building and Smack, He whack the robot in his face. “You won’t take over this world!” said Batman in a grumbling voice. Then coming out of nowhere comes Spiderman with his webb's shooting at the Giant robot. “ Come get me before Batman” said Spiderman.
Bang, Boom, went all the buildings falling like dominoes in one straight line. “ Hahahahahaaaa” said the robot in a happy voice, and then gave a cheeky grin. Picking up people the Giant robot threw them around like they were toys, and they went SMASH, SPLAT, most of the people died, with a cracked body.
Suddenly with a soft creeping up behind the Giant robot came Spider man getting ready to shoot his web’s around the Robot’s arms and legs. After that Batman zoomed to the top of a building and waited for Spider man to shoot his web’s around the Robot’s arms and legs so he can throw his batarangs. Suddenly SPLAT, SPLAT, SPLAT, went the web’s around the robot’s arms and legs, then, BANG, BANG, BANG, went Batman's batarangs straight to the robot’s body. While Batman flew down gently Spider man said “ Wow, we destroyed the Giant Robot”, “ Yet, cool” said Batman in a grumbling voice.
Task description: To do this task I had write a story about a superhero that was all ready envented. Or I could create my own superhero and write about it, But I chose to write about a superhero that was already envented and the superhero was Batman and Spider Man.
Friday, 27 May 2016
Comic Writing
| Walt: use onomatopoeia in our writing |
Task description: To do this task I had to fill the speech marks, thought bubbles and the onamatopeoic words.
Tuesday, 10 May 2016
Superhero description

| Walt: use similes and metaphors in our writing.Her hair was brown as a rusty pole, and long like a basketball player's leg. Her Iron armor is unbreakable, and built like a tank. Her armor is as black as the night time sky. She can disappear like black widow. She is as tall and as the sky town, and as muscular as hulk smash. Her powers are super flying strength and hand body laser. Task description: To do this task I had to create my own superhero in a cool kids creater. I also had to write 4 sentence about my superhero. |
Wednesday, 4 May 2016
Immersion Assembly recount
Walt: recount an event.
Overall I am looking forward to this term. I’m also looking forward to reading other student’s comic books in team 4.
Task description: To do this task I had to write a recount about Immersion Assembly. We had to post it on our writing on our blog with the video.
Have you ever studied comic books before? Well this term team 4 will be studying comic books, and drawing pictures to go with it. I’m looking forwards to this terms topic.
This term our schools topic is “ as i see it” in artwork. Team 1 was learning all about their favourite thing and draw them as well. The other teams are learning about things Seasons, Architecture and Waka’s.
Team 4’s topic is about comic books and sequential art. The team 4 teachers set an example and made a movie showing us what a created comic book looks like. There were 4 mighty Teacher Vengers in this movie and one voice over person. There names were Bat guy, Wondering Woman, Team Leader America and the Evil villain Bear Baxindine. Back in the 90’s caveman did sequential art to tell their stories.
This term I hope that we get to create our own comic books. My favourite comic books are Wonder Woman, and Iron man. If I was to create my own comic book my superhero will be Wonder Woman, She’s my favourite out of all heros.
Overall I am looking forward to this term. I’m also looking forward to reading other student’s comic books in team 4.
Task description: To do this task I had to write a recount about Immersion Assembly. We had to post it on our writing on our blog with the video.
Friday, 15 April 2016
End of the term post
Walt: Write a End of the term post
“ Hello blog readers, today is the last post that is going on my blog for the term. Thank you for sending me kind comments this term. I am going looking forward to posting more and more next term. My favourite highlight from this is reading the awesome comments that you left me. Thank you.
Task description: To do thos task I had to write a paragraph about my last blog poast.
“ Hello blog readers, today is the last post that is going on my blog for the term. Thank you for sending me kind comments this term. I am going looking forward to posting more and more next term. My favourite highlight from this is reading the awesome comments that you left me. Thank you.
Task description: To do thos task I had to write a paragraph about my last blog poast.
Tuesday, 12 April 2016
My Fiafia writing
Walt: organise my ideas into paragraphs and link them together.
How I felt that night was excited but a little bit nervous. I thought that I performed well. I think that everyone performed well.
Task desription: To do this task we had to write about our expirments on fiafia night. We had to write 5 Par about fiafia.
Have you ever been to a fiafia event? Well at Pt England School last week we had a fiafia performance, it is one of my the best event so far. I really enjoyed it.
Fiafia is about everyone that Pt England School participating in a cultural group, and . Our fiafia happened on the 7th April 2016 Thursday. This event was on our school field, and covering stage was a big marque. The event was only our Pt England student.
The group that I was in was the Middle school Hip Hop team. I chose this group because I really enjoy dance it cool song like dessert. We have been practicing from week 4 to week 9 and worked really hard on our dances. In fact everyone in our school have been working hard as well.
My favourite performance was the Jump Jam group. I chose this group because I really like the their glow in the dark bands around their neck and hands. Also I like there song, It was one of the best song I’ve ever heard.
How I felt that night was excited but a little bit nervous. I thought that I performed well. I think that everyone performed well.
Task desription: To do this task we had to write about our expirments on fiafia night. We had to write 5 Par about fiafia.
Tuesday, 5 April 2016
Year 5/6 camp
Two weeks ago it was Pt England 26th anniversary on camp. Have you ever been on camp? Well I have. I’m a year 5 so I get to go camping again next year.
We camped on the Pt England school field. What we had to had was get split into groups. This was only a team 4 event.
My favourite highlight was killer zone with Mr Jacobson. This was my favourite activity because neven do we lost, we herded the Kind Krew cheering us on. Finally we reached the end and the boys raised our flag.
My second highlight was camp cooking with Mrs Garden in the kitchen hall. This was because the girls got to cook chocolate chip cookies. When they were ready the soft cookies started to brake when we lifted them up. With the broken cookies we got to eat them. But the boys were lucky because they got to cook maori bread with Matua.
How I felt about this amazing camp was excited because I’ve never been on camp before. So I’m looking forward to having another great experiments on camp next year.
Task description: To do this task we had to read the instrution on our class site writing page. After that we had to writing what the instrution said.
Tuesday, 15 March 2016
The three little pigs
Walt: retelling a stroy
Three little pigs and the Big bad wolf.
In a forest there lived 3 little pigs and they lived within their mum in a little house. One day the 3 little pigs haad to go and build there own houses. They seet off and found a wonderful waterfall to build there houses by.
1st pig built his house out of straw. 2nd pig built his house out of sticks. Last pig put lots of effor in his house and built it out of bricks. 1st and 2nd rust so the can play, sind and dance.
But then along came the big bad wolf and scared 1st and 2nd to there house. Wolf chase little pig to his house and said “ Little pig little pig let me come” pig said “ not by the hair of my chinny chin chin” “ Then I’ll huff, and I’ll puff ,and I’ll blow your house down” he said. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh wooooooooooo. Pig ran to 2nd pigs house and said” Let me in brother, the big bad wolf is coming for us” “ wait” said 2nd pig. 2nd pig open the door “ come in” said the brother. Wolf knocked and said “ Little pig little pig let me in” “ Not by the hair on our chinny chin chin” said 2nd pig. “ Then I’ll huff, and I’ll puff, and I’ll blow your house down”. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Wooooooooooo aand 2 pigs house got buster too. 1st and 2nd brother then ran to 3th pigs house and knocked and said “brother brother you got to let us in the big bad wolf is coming for us”, “ Wait at minute” said 3th pig. 3th little pig opened the door and the 2 other brother ran in and hid under pigs bed. Wolf knocked and said “ Little pigs little pigs let me in” “ Not by the hair of my chinny chin chin” said 3th pig. “ Then I’ll huff and I’ll puff and I’ll blow your house down”. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Wooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Task descirption: To do this I had to write and retell the story about the three little pig .
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