Friday, 15 May 2015


You may watch this movie above.
I hope you enjoyed.

On a cloudy starless night Jimmy was roasting marshmallows over a sizzling fire. Jimmy heard the gentle lapping from the lake coming to the shore. The towering trees were surrounding him while he was roasting marshmallows.

While the monster crept up behind Jimmy he made huge stomps. The monster had two yellow and green angry eyes and a darkie green skin color body.

Trying to defend himself Jimmy used his marshmallow on a stick like a sword. Suddenly Jimmy now knew that the monster liked marshmallows because he snatched it out of Jimmy's hand and gobbled it down his throat. Then he transformed into a performing puppy after his first marshmallow. The monster balanced, rolled over and jumped upside down. 

Jimmy went fishing in his bag for a marshmallow. He gasped, “Oh no` I only have one more marshmallow left” he thought.

Cautiously Jimmy held out the very last marshmallow in his hand. As soon as the monster saw it he quickly raced to gobble up the last marshmallow with his dirty pink tongue.     
Waiting expectantly the monster sat up quickly for his next Marshmallow. At last the monster reverted into a scary monster. Then Jimmy stumbled over a stone and fell down. Jimmy stood up and ran to his tent to hide behind his white pillow.

When the monster saw the pillow he thought that it was a giant marshmallow. So he quickly ran to grab it. The monster ran back to the fire and started to roast the pillow. As soon as he roasted it the pillow quickly turned into ashes.   


1 comment:

  1. You have worked hard on this Chastyti. You have included many effective sentences. Well done.