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Tuesday, 31 March 2015

School Picnic.

On a cloudy overcast Friday Point England School went down to the Point. We went down to there to have a picnic.

My favourite activity was the Karaoke because we got to sing on the microphone. While I waited patiently in line for my turn me and my partner talked. Next it suddenly came to me and my partners turn to sing. I was feeling nervous because I had to sing in front of lots of teachers, parent helpers and children. The song I sang was Let it go from Frozen.

My second favourite activity I liked was playing down on the sand. When I got down on the sand I played with some slimy, sticky, gluggy and gooey clay. “Did you know that clay is my favourite thing down on the beach”.

I felt AMAZING because  got to play with my friends.




Monday, 30 March 2015

Easter Eggs

My word cloud about Easter.

Malama Honua


Traveling from Hawaii comes the Hokule’a and the Hikianalia waka. They used traditional navigation methods. They are double hulled. They navigate by using the stars.


The two waka are going on a journey circumnavigating the globe. There voyage is called Malama Honua.


Yesterday there was a special event happening down at Point England beach. The two waka called Hokule’a and the Hikianalia waka came to New Zealand and landed on point england beach. That is why all the 12 Manaiakalani clusters of schools went down to the point.
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(Think of 1 or 2 things that you need to to focus on next time, to make sure your paragraphs are effective.)
Next time I  need to work on is grammatically correct

Monday, 23 March 2015

Motat Reflection.

Introducing ourself to Katherine our educator, we were nervous. After we introuduced  ourself to our educator Katherine she introduced herself to us.
She told us explicit instructions.

Chastyti you can delete this after but I just wanted to remind you that you needed to copy and paste all the paragraphs you did into this blog post not just the first one.


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(Think of 1 or 2 things that you need to to focus on next time, to make sure your paragraphs are effective.)
Next time I  need to work on having sentences that are effective that have varied beginnings.

Problem Solving.

Friday, 13 March 2015

My cookie face writing.


On Friday the picnic was because of the horrible weather that happened. There were lots of dark clouds in the sky.

I waited patiently for Miss Thompson to finish her instructions so we know what to do when we go and make our happy face biscuit. I was so excited to make my first cookie face biscuit.

Decorating my biscuit was exciting. The ingredients we used were m&m, sprinkles, chocolate and lollies. My biscuit looked amazing when I finished decorating it.

When I finished making my cookie I got to eat it and it was delicious. While I was eating my chocolate it melted in my mouth. My cookie was so tasty and amazing.

I felt excited because that was my first time making my every own cookie face. Making my cookie face was amazing.

This ois a photo of me with my happy cookie face biscuit.

Friday, 6 March 2015

My Favourite Things.

KFC and Chocolate is my favourite food because they both look delicious and yummy.