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Monday 23 March 2015

Motat Reflection.

Introducing ourself to Katherine our educator, we were nervous. After we introuduced  ourself to our educator Katherine she introduced herself to us.
She told us explicit instructions.

Chastyti you can delete this after but I just wanted to remind you that you needed to copy and paste all the paragraphs you did into this blog post not just the first one.


Criteria for an Effective Paragraph
Par 1
Par 2
Par 3
Par 4
Par 5
⚈ Start with a topic sentence.
yes
yes
yes


⚈ Have at least 2-3 connected sentences.
yes
yes
yes


⚈ Have sentences that are effective that
  1. have varied beginnings
no
no
no


    b.  have juicy vocab e.g action/describing  words
yes
yes
yes


    (c) grammatically correct
yes
yes
yes


  (d) punctuated correctly.
yes
yes
yes


(Think of 1 or 2 things that you need to to focus on next time, to make sure your paragraphs are effective.)
Next time I  need to work on having sentences that are effective that have varied beginnings.

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