Walt: write why the teachers are going on strike and what they want.
Why are teachers going on strike?
This Wednesday across the whole world all the teachers that
teacher in primary and intermediate are going on strike.
This is the second time in 24 years that the teachers are going
on strike.
Why are teachers going on strike?
This Wednesday across the whole world all the teachers that
teacher in primary and intermediate are going on strike.
This is the second time in 24 years that the teachers are going
on strike.
What the teachers want?
There are three things that teacher want to help school and themselves.
One thing that teachers want is More time to teach. That means teachers want less jobs
to do like writing a reflection after every single separate session. They just want more time to
teach with the children so they have a better education and life.
One thing that teachers want is More time to teach. That means teachers want less jobs
to do like writing a reflection after every single separate session. They just want more time to
teach with the children so they have a better education and life.
What the teachers want?
One thing that teachers want are better resources. For example privates schools have classes
of 14 students and one teacher. Isn’t that cool? But looking at states school there are
double the amount of student that are in a class at a private school. So teacher think that
schools need more teachers and better resources to work on.
One thing that teachers want are better resources. For example privates schools have classes
of 14 students and one teacher. Isn’t that cool? But looking at states school there are
double the amount of student that are in a class at a private school. So teacher think that
schools need more teachers and better resources to work on.
Hey Chastyti,you are making some great points here. I agree, it would be so helpful to have more teachers and more resources.
ReplyDeleteThis writing would be even better if you could take out the red questions before each paragraph, and then even try using different ways of starting the paragraphs. For example, in the last paragraph, rather than 'One thing...' you could say 'Another thing...' or 'One more thing...' etc.
That is just a little extra suggestion.
You've done good work. Keep it up.